Growing up, it was hard for me to express my emotions, especially with my family. I was highly inspired by Jimmy Santiago Baca’s “I Am Offering This Poem” and wrote my own version of it, called I Am Offering My Love, as a way to convey my feelings.
I don’t have much to give, maybe I don’t have anything at all.
I don’t have the money to buy you anything.
I can’t wrestle with God to claim the Earth for you.
However, I have my love, and I hope it can reach you through this poem.
Thank you
You were the one who brought me into this world.
A world that has given me happiness,
a world with you.
Would you keep this?
After I’ve thrived, after I’ve soared to new heights and left you, would you keep this?
Thank you
For so long, you were my lifeline.
I couldn’t do anything without you, and you stayed with me the whole time.
Because of you, I am where I am today.
Thank you
You are like the sun, lighting the way for me.
You are like a pillar, supporting me and always making sure I’m still standing.
Like a book, always having an interesting story to tell me.
And I am always willing to listen.
Thank you
On a rainy day, I remember the times we had together, and it suddenly feels like it was sunny all week.
I would remember all the times we would go to the park and eat ice cream.
I would remember all the times we went shopping when there were sales.
I would remember all the times you made me laugh.
Hopefully, you remember those times too.
Those moments with you kept me going during difficult times.
I know we will make a million more memories, because you’ll always be by my side.
So thank you, for everything
This is so beautiful, thanks for sharing your work!